Don’t tell me how much you love me,
Don’t tell me how much you care
Don’t tell me about the tears you shed,
Or how lonely you felt when I wasn’t there.
Don’t tell me any of this
For I know that I can hurt you,
Know that there is a chance one of us might walk away,
And know deep down it will be who.
Don’t tell me any of this,
For I will try every second to live up to your love,
I will try every second to believe,
In something I know you don’t deserve.
Don’t tell me any of this,
For I’ll overthink every moment of us,
And even though I know I love you too,
I will worry that I might never be enough.
Don’t tell me any of this,
For I am scared that I will shatter you,
I am scared of commitment,
And I am scared of what this fear of mine might lead to.
Don’t tell me any of this at all,
Not now, and not ever,
For I am just trying to live in the moment,
When you are having dreams of forever.
So don’t tell me how much you love me,
And don’t ever tell me how much you care,
For I am too much of a coward,
And I’ll just end up walking away.
~Nehal
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😀❤
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Aah, I just loved it Nehal.Exceptionally beautifully!
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Thanks a lot, Aayushi!!
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My pleasure!
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Love it!! Errr… What was this about??
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Fiction, I guess or is it real, tell us Nehal!!
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It’s kinda inspired by real feelings so…
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Yeah, I’m curious too! 😉 *Slurps tea and gets a packet of chips to share*
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😂😂
It might be inspired by real feelings, hehe, but not all of it is real.
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Thanks! 😂
It’s about this weird sort of fear that comes to the narrator when someone says that they love them, they fear that they will end up hurting the said someone, especially because they’re not sure if they feel the same way. So they’ll end up walking away before even giving the relationship a chance.
I hope that made sense 😶.
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THE NARRATOR? THAT’S YOU AIN’T IT
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Well yeaaah..
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Wow, exquisite poem, my friend!
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Thanks di!! 😙
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This is so good nehal! I just hope it’s fiction, though
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Thanks a lot, Riddhi!!
Yeah well, it’s complicated. It’s a mix of both fiction and real though.
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I see
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this is sooo beautifully written!! I loved it a lot❤️❤️❤️ is it real huh?😂😂 wow! I can relate cause me and my lo.. broke up recently. how come everyone is writing abt these topics in the blogosphere huh?😂😂😊
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Thanks so much, Anushka!!
And aye no, this isn’t like dedicated to some lover or something 😂. It’s just about how I sometimes fear that I’ll end up hurting the people who love me.
Oh gosh, how are you dealing with the break-up?
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same!😊 even I fear that now since we broke up for that very reason. but u know what Nehal! u shouldn’t change yourself thats what I learnt😊 maybe people are gonna say that in future to bring you down… yes m dealing great thanks!😊😂 It was my 1st so I really dont care much however it lasted 3 years. but I just miss him, dont want him😂😂😊lol thanks for asking tho
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Oh man, three years is a long time! Hope you’ll get over missing him soon 😅.
And yeah, we shouldn’t change ourselves, I know that too 😁.
Pleasure! Thanks for reading.
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Yes ik🙂 well I dont wanna get over missing him😊😊 we had soo many wonderful memories I rather think about it everyday😘
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Oh. That’s niceee!!
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Amazing work, Nehal ❣️Its stunning.
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Thanks a lot, Hermione! 😁
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u a Harry Potter fan?😂😊
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Yes I am a huge fan. Isn’t that obvious ? 🤣
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yo!! m also😊😂
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this was deep nehal many can relate to it now.!
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Gee, thanks a lot!! 🤗
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Nehu wow. This is so relatable! Hmm. Based on real life too?
Well, you know, it’s always worth taking a risk. Giving the relationship a chance. Cause if it works out then it’s amazing. And if it doesn’t, you took a risk, a chance, and you learned for the better.
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Thanks a lot, Sep!!
And well, it’s only worth it when both people feel the same way. Sometimes, it’s unrequited and you just go along with it because you don’t want to hurt the other person…wow, look at me talking as if I’ve gone through some major shit when I haven’t 😂😂.
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Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. TRUE
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Lol
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yass!! thats a perfect definition of relationship ❤️❤️ are u guys experts of it? like me😂😂😂😂
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Sep might be, I definitely am not.
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ooooh sep! she might have experienced it
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Ask herrrrr.
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Aaaah so beautifully written. And so relatable. 🙈
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Thanks a lot, di! Glad you liked it!!
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You write beautifully, Nehal. ❤
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Thank you, Sheri!! 😃
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So welcome! ☺
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Aah Nehal!! This is so SO good! Absolutely relatable but you know what they say – “love is worth all risks” ( that’s not always true tho 😅)… I hope you’re doing okay…? Again, I LOOVE THIS ❤️❤️❤️
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Thanks a lot, Diya, I’m glad you liked it!!
And oh man, I’m doing great, don’t worry 😂. This might be inspired by real feelings but it isn’t inspired by any romantic relationship or something, coz I’ve never even had one 😂.
Thanks a lot, though!
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That is beautiful!
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Thanks a lot! 😊
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Welcome 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thanks a lot, Isha! 😃
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Amazing poemm!!
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Thank youuu, Betty!! 😀
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Ahhh, I love this! 💙 (I could totally see these as lyrics to a sad guitar song 😉)
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Want me to do a cover…😏?
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Ummm… do you even have to ask? Yes!!!! 😄
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Sure….*totally isn’t kidding* 😂🙂
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Please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
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Nuh uh 😀.
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Marvellous dear nehal..! You nailed it..!👏👏✨😊💕
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Thank you so much, Filarance!! 😃
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You’re very welcome dear..
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Movingly beautiful, Nehal. ❤️
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Thanks di, glad you liked it! 😄
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You are welcome. 😊
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Great work nehal, is it fiction again or real, huh?
I hope its a mix of both.
But you know what its worth the risk (am not a expert over here, am just like you, so ig ask Sep)
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Yup, it’s pretty much a mix of both.
True that! Thanks a lot!! 😄
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Why does this feel like it’s for me? It’s not. I know. But you act like this with me. This is seriously really good tho Nehu!
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I act like this with you? When? 🤔
No, it’s not for any specific person, several people though😂. I’m just a big over thinker so forget it, i dont even know what i am talking about anymore 🙂.
Thanks a lot!! 😀
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Ik ik😂 it just felt like it.
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Ohh that’s so beautifully written ❤️You’ve expressed the feelings so well dude!
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Thanks a ton, Somya!! 😁
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❤️🙌
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it feels scary when people plan their life around you, doesn’t it?
great poem mistress apple!
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Yes, god yes, it does!!!!
Thanks Akshita! 💟
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