sheets of waves cover
asleep sea, lighthouse rotates
sparkling lullabies
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Above in response to Carpe Diem Haiku prompt: Lighthouse
sheets of waves cover
asleep sea, lighthouse rotates
sparkling lullabies
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Above in response to Carpe Diem Haiku prompt: Lighthouse
Awesome haiku … but I think you missed an essential part of this Kamishibai feature. The task is to write a haibun, a short story with a haiku enclosed. Nevertheless … this haiku is awesome and I love to use it in our upcoming Tan Renga month if that’s ok?
Glad you clarified – actually I got carried away when I saw the word lighthouse and then did not read further, my bad! i will read it, to understand this better – maybe i can come up with something 🙂
Please go ahead and use it, I am glad you found it useful.
I love the waves cover on the sleeping sea…..wish I had thought of that…..thanks…opie
a wonderful inspiring piece – thanks
a soothing haiku and i enjoyed working a completion for it in this month’s tan renga. thanks for sharing.