The concept is simple: Here’s a doodle. Now write a poem to accompany it!
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The concept is simple: Here’s a doodle. Now write a poem to accompany it!
New to doodleku? See the original post; you can also click here to keep track of each day.
A room of my own for writing?
It’s a start!
Most curious–
nails sometimes fit
into everything.
Got a two-fer for you tonight…
trial separation
it all comes down
to brass tacks
[a desku, I promise!!]
winter rain
it all comes down
to brass tacks
desku or not, i like the first one!
hammer and nails…
doing what my dad
never taught me
not hitting the nail on the head cardinal’s conclave
oops . . . I meant for this to read:
not hitting the nail on the head cardinals’ conclave
young couple
tacks sheets over windows–
moonlit palace
too many plurals:
young couple
tacking sheets over windows–
moonlit palace
following
in father’s footsteps –
another bent nail
hazy sky…
why did you nsist on
turning me
into a nail, the moment you
said your last goodbye!
*insist
the end of snow
I plant the early seeds
of spring
**
http://www.rickdaddario.com/
Rick Daddario
Kailua, Hawaii
USA
trying hard,
to hammer last nail,
in coffin of this day,
ouch!!! hurt my soul.
fences –
the wind always trying
to take me
the things that can’t be mended spring snow
Mailed my poem to you, Aubrie. It needed a little formatting which i didn’t know how to do here.
the garage shelves filled
with unfinished projects
morning drizzle
decided I don’t need an article before “garage”:
garage shelves filled
with unfinished projects
morning drizzle
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every nail
a hole
pinpricks in the conscience
drawing blood
sickle moon
the curve
of our hammock
things
I take for granted …
sunrise
pounding headaches. . .
the many times death
knocks on the door
who am I to drive away
this uninvited guest
* I guess the two last lines can be eliminated
father’s silence
the hammer and nails
his voice