It’s that time again. #FirstLineFriday. Every Friday I post the first one or two lines of a potential story, work-in-progress, or published work. This week’s opening comes from a potential short story I had the idea for yesterday:
Captain Leyla Janx, fifteen years old and feeling her life shortening with every second, ordered her aircraft carrier to turn fifteen degrees to the port side.
Thoughts? Comments? Grammatical errors? Let me know.
That’s all for now. If I get the chance, I’ll write a post about my first week in Germany later today. Until then, I’m off to work. Einen schonen Tag, my Followers of Fear (please say I wrote that right!).
Rami Ungar The Writer 