Perfect for you…
Will you let me try to be the man perfect for you?
By: Julian Javier
Date: May 18, 2011 @ 2:01AM GMT +8
Bread will not fill me…
Water will not quench me…
Even my cigarettes will not understand me…
For only you can complete me…
Water will not quench me…
Even my cigarettes will not understand me…
For only you can complete me…
From the moment your eyes met mine…
I said to myself “Oh God, I wish you’re mine”…
Even in the darkness you shine…
Bringing colors to this black and white heart of mine…
I said to myself “Oh God, I wish you’re mine”…
Even in the darkness you shine…
Bringing colors to this black and white heart of mine…
I long for that alluring glimmer…
found only from your beautiful eyes…
I long for your lovely smile…
that is as gorgeous as the sunrise…
found only from your beautiful eyes…
I long for your lovely smile…
that is as gorgeous as the sunrise…
I long for the gentleness and softness…
found only from your luscious lips…
I long for the warm breathing sensation…
found only from your nostrils..
found only from your luscious lips…
I long for the warm breathing sensation…
found only from your nostrils..
I want to feel your smoothness…
from your hands of divine beauty…
I want to feel your frailty…
and the warmth from your body…
from your hands of divine beauty…
I want to feel your frailty…
and the warmth from your body…
Every day I think of you…
Every night I dream of you…
Every time I close my eyes I see you…
Like your smile has been etched on my mind like a tattoo…
Every night I dream of you…
Every time I close my eyes I see you…
Like your smile has been etched on my mind like a tattoo…
I’ll never stop thinking…
I’ll never stop longing…
I’ll never stop dreaming…
Of you, only for you…
I’ll never stop longing…
I’ll never stop dreaming…
Of you, only for you…
To me you are perfect and my heart knows it’s true…
I want to show you love that is true…
Not in vain nor for granted… unlike what others had done to you…
Will you let me try to be the perfect man for you?
I want to show you love that is true…
Not in vain nor for granted… unlike what others had done to you…
Will you let me try to be the perfect man for you?
Here I am writing my heart out with all my passion…
With prayers that my ink will someday catch your attention…
Maybe someday in your mind my name will be a mention…
Feel my heart in my words written with a loving fashion…
With prayers that my ink will someday catch your attention…
Maybe someday in your mind my name will be a mention…
Feel my heart in my words written with a loving fashion…
To me you are perfect and I knows it’s true…
I want to try and be the perfect man for you…
I want to try and be the perfect man for you…
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this reminds me so much of my boyfriend… it hurts to read it
hope you read my post
http://belladonna23.wordpress.com/2011/09/12/random-thoughts-phantom-stars/
strong emotions, beautifully expressed.
Here I am writing my heart out with all my passion… You nailed it with this line, because write your heart out is exactly what you did with this one. Excellent piece!
now that’s true passion…when the eyes breathe
awesome writing
I second Jingle’s comment. I loved the line about the cigarettes.
I’m gonna use this in my marriage proposal if I have the chance
Good job.
– RPIMotion Author
“Even my cigarettes will not understand me”… 🙂
THis is a very loving ode to some lucky lady ….
What a great poem – love how you integrated pictures with your work.
You should give her the poem, that would surely win her over!
romantic 🙂 ……very lovely indeed
beautiful 🙂
Nice fluidity in your words! Great job!
Awww so sweet =)
Hope the love in this poem is requited. What a lucky lady she would be!
the first stanza could be an independent piece as well.
amazing piece, have fun today.
nicely done…
Love your romantic side… Pure emotions. Perfect poem by a perfect poet! 😉